Vannah[Was All She Wrote]

I'll try spacing it out more. You arne't being harsh.Any advice you can give is great. I promise, the romance is coming soon.

I like it,but like Hopeless.I'm confused. Does her boyfriend force her to have sex with him? Why is she so angry with him?Where is her anger coming from?

Preface:Salem is different from most people,by both her name and occupation.Different is all she has ever known.But,today is just a normal day at work............ "Morning Ray,"I announced as I walked

Thanks guys:]

This is very well written.I wouldn't change a thing about it.Great job:]

Nice work.I really like it.

Barely holding back the tears, You told me how much she's loved you for all these years. What am I supposed to do now that she wants you? You said ...